Tuesday, June 17, 2025

Ketch-up Tuesday: Denise's Perspective Challenge

 

Denise's perspective challenge 


 Tree stump in an enchanted forest GI by FairytaleDesign from Getty Images

 

Long ago, before the gods were destroyed, he stood in the realm of the forest, tall and regal,ageless. 

Nature paid him homage.

The sun warmed his branches. Moonlight threw his shadow. The rain nurtured him. The wind blew dulcimer melodies through his branches. Even the woodland creatures honored him with their presence as the birds sang delicately in his ears. Only man stayed away.  

Perhaps, they feared what they didn't understand. Whatever their reasons, he cared naught.

Then one day, when least expected, the little girl burst into the forest. Her radiance rivaling the moon and her smile the sun. She craned her neck and looked up where his branches reached into the sky, overshadowing the other trees.

She walked to him, her small hand outstretched and placed it on his rough bark."Thank you," she said simply. A child that understood what lived  inside the tall, magnificent tree. He lowered his branches till they gently encircled her. A moment later, he raised them again, standing immobile as he had for centuries, the sentinel of the forest.  

Years passed. Then one day, when least expected, an old woman, bent and leaning on a cane, traversed the forest. Her radiance faded, her smile dimmed. She hobbled forward and placed her hand on the gnarled tree stump. "Thank you," she said simply. For a moment, a face appeared in the stump and nodded. Then the features disappeared and the stump stood immobile, the sentinel of the forest.

 

 

  

26 comments:

D.L. Finn said...

I absolutely love this, Sandra :) I like to think if we ran into this tree we would know to thank it.

Elephant's Child said...

This is truly beautiful. Thank you.

David M. Gascoigne, said...

Sandra, you are tugging at the strings of all that I value in life. I too touch the trees, always have, always will. They are my friends, we know each other well.

R's Rue said...

Amazing.

Natalie Aguirre said...

Thanks for sharing this. It'sbeautiful.

Jamie Ghione said...

Thanks for sharing.

CJ Kennedy said...

Beautiful vignette.

Jan Sikes said...

What a lovely story, Sandra. I love the full circle aspect!

Christine said...

Beautiful

Sandra Cox said...

Thanks, Denise:) Start looking for him in your forest:) xo

Sandra Cox said...

Thank you, EC. I'm glad you like it:)

Sandra Cox said...

I'm glad you liked it, David, and that you and nature are intertwined.

Sandra Cox said...

Thank you, Regine:)

Sandra Cox said...

Thank you, Natalie. That makes me smile.

Sandra Cox said...

Thanks for reading, Jamie;)

Sandra Cox said...

Thanks, CJ:) Vignette....Hmmm, sounds like a Writerly Wednesday word......

Sandra Cox said...

Thanks so much, Jan:)

Sandra Cox said...

Thanks, Christine:) Glad you think so.

Jacqui Murray--Writer-Teacher said...

I am not surprised at all that you hit this one spot on, Sandra.

Sandra Cox said...

You made my day. Thank you, Jacqui:)

J.P. Alexander said...

Me gusto el relato. Te mando un beso.

Sandra Cox said...

Thank you, JP. Sending you hugs

Anonymous said...

This is Birgit…I really enjoyed reading this excerpt. It’s so magical.

Sandra Cox said...

Thank you, Birgit. I'm so glad you liked it.

Jeanie said...

This is so beautiful, Sandra. I don't know what the challenge was but the writing is exquisite.

Sandra Cox said...

Oh thank you, Jeanie. I'm thrilled you like it:)
We were to write whatever the picture inspired.